The story is about a hot headed teenage girl (susan) who has a vision of jesus,
Which gives her a different out look on life,
Our story begins in the girls home where she is baby sitting her younger sister
and brother,
Her parents are away,and her older sister kelly is gone to see her and
susans fave band playing
in the local village hall,
Susan waited months for the band to play locally,
But as it turned out it was her turn to baby sit the night the band were playing
It is a beautiful summers night,
So susan decides to take a chance and go and get a glimpse of her fave band,
She takes a two miles short cut across the fields to the local village,
Susan arrives @ the village to discover the band had cancelled their gig
Susan rings home on her mobile but her younger sister does not answer the phone,
Susan panics and races across the fields to get home to her sister and brother,
Loseing her mobile phone on the way,
After about a mile she gets lost,
Susan reaches to her pocket for her phone to ring for help,
She is in a panic now she cant find her phone and she does not know
where she is,
Oh dear jesus please help me (susan prays) i want to get home,
Then she sees a vision of jesus carring a cross,
He is looking
@ her and she is moved with pity for him,
She wants to help him but cant reach him,
To be continued
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" Some men see things as they are,
and say why, I dream of things
that never were, and say why not."
- Bobby Kennedy
