Allright, so in my haste I put together at least something, it might inspire others to do better. At least I hope, since the quality on this one is pretty hideous.
Overacting ignored, the hiss you hear on the background is the poor soundcard I mentioned. Also, my breathguard is missing on this mic setup, so I decided to use it as an added effect. The long breath-in is in there intentionally.
Originally I did these one line at a time, but for some reason it fealt more natural to just oneline it all at once. If you feel my timing is off (too fast, too slow, too strong emphasis on something, I sound ridiculous to your ears, anything), please post something about it in the comments. Remember, this is a first draft to base the future on, I did this in less than 20 takes, including the single line tries.
Here's to hoping others do better on the nazis, since my voice is definitely too young for the officers.
EDIT: Allright, upped version 2 with "regular speech", Berlin still ended up being a bit focused, but it's the way it's spoken so meh.
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Thanks for the second version, just listened it through for the first time and it didn't sound half bad. We might well ask you to try out the rest of that narration within a week or two.
I'm closing this task now since the deadline for the officer roles proved out to be too strict for doing it properly through the community, but there's still time for the American role.
I'll also open a new task in the near future with several new characters to audition for.
Sorry, I was supposed to write you longer comments, but looks like today was a lot busier than I expected. :/ Tomorrow I'll only be at work half of the day before heading off to Ropecon so I might not have the time then either. Anyway, what I already wrote was the gist of it, overall your voice sounds very usable to me.
If you'll get a new version up during the weekend I'll do my best to give you feedback on both on Monday, I hope to get more entries by then too (especially for the officers). :) I'll also run all the entries by some other team members for comments.
Whee, it's great to hear good feedback.
I'll cook up a lighter accented version sometime in the near future, after listening to that version one more time a day later, I realize it is laying it on pretty thick.
I'm really starting to regret my choice of mic and recording gear, I'd love the soundbits to sound better. Guess I'll be going to Verkkokauppa to buy that new headset afterall =).
Not bad at all in such a tight schedule!
I'm wrapping up work for today right now, but I'll put together some proper comments tomorrow.
For now, after a quick listening of a few times, I especially like the bit from "I remember thinking..." until the end, it has a nice and natural feel.
Could you try a version with slightly lighter accent next, it'd be nice to get to compare the versions? Also some words like "Berlin" and "circle" could have slightly lighter emphasis, perhaps.
Also, thanks for the shot! Can't say anything for certain, but I'm pretty confident that we'll find use for your voice, either for this character or some other (perhaps even several, I've got a couple of options in mind already). We'll be needing stuff for various starting-, ending- and in-between narrations and we've also been thinking of recording some of the important dialogues in the game too via Wreckamovie if we get enough motivated wreckers together in the community. :)