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The overall story

Created at June 26, 2010
Created by Justin Pradier
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How can we expand the ideas in the original scripts to include the points of view of the serial killer and the detective hunting him.

My idea for the base part of the story is:

Script 1:
Serial killer stalks woman.
Serial killer kidnaps woman.
Serial killer tortures woman.

Script 2: (occurs after script 1 in timeframe)
Woman escapes.
Woman captures torturer.
Woman goes insane exacting her revenge.

Script 3: (overlaps script 1 and 2 in timeframe)
Detective tracks serial killer to woman's town.
Detective tracks down the house the serial killer uses.
Detective arrests woman thinking she is the serial killer.

Keep in mind that the scripts need to follow the overall story. Ordering of the scenes will be done (hopefully) by hundreds of hands in hundreds of ways.


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(null) August 10, 2010 13:52 0 Thumb-ups
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What exactly are you asking for help with?

I'd love to help with story development ideas, but I'm not 100% sure what kind of help you're after.

The general plot sounds fine, though perhaps a bit too familiar to audiences?

And what did you mean by "How can we expand the ideas in the original scripts to include the points of view of the serial killer and the detective hunting him"?

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Justin Pradier June 27, 2010 07:39 Production Leader 0 Thumb-ups
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Script 2: Idea

I'd really like to see the woman start off with sheer determination to give the killer as good as he has dished out, but her true self not being able to cope and she travels the slow spiral into madness as she tries to reconcile what she is doing with her true self.

How can this be shown?

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Dale Kalinowski June 28, 2010 15:04 Flag

I am dale with headrush Independent films I am a director /writer/actor and graphic designer if you would like any help Id be happy to assist ..I can help you in many of the areas that you are seeking .. I have Two films published.. go to www.headrushfilms.homestead.com or youtube at the headrushindi chanell

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