| Created at | May 30, 2010 |
| Created by | Qasim |
| Deadline | Not set |
| Shots given | 2 |
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| Daniel Saarimäki | Hard to read |
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| Daniel Saarimäki | Story |
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The The Rise -team is looking for your ideas and comments. Join and show your support for The Rise. Story
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DescriptionHere is the first version of the story. Your suggestions and comments are greatly welcomed.
Shots StoryYour story seems like a ordinary fantasy story. I hate them, but it's the best solution for this movie. Some things I like to say: -Is there any other villages than dark village and village of light? You said that the black side has the most of the world, but if there are just two villages, do the black ones have anything to have? Lord of the Rings was good, because it had hughe and carefully planned world, wich made it more interesting -There are only one healer in each side. The reason coul be, that they are traditional personal guards of the king. -The ability to make protectors from water, fire and etc. is a good thing. It makes this movie different from the other similar films, so I suggest to put that scene earlier and put the hero to use that ability many times. Your version is brilliant though. This is just a suggestion. Hard to readCould you attach a .rtf file also? That text file is little bit hard to read. CommentsWow. 3 pages! Copypaste it into a wordprocessor. |
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