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Review Lectures and Write Screenplay

Created at April 30, 2010
Created by William H. Mook, JR.
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Review the lectures contained in this playlist and write a screenplay to dramatize the concepts there.

http://www.youtube.com/view_play_list?p=838BBE4ECC513CCB


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Simo Raittila May 17, 2010 06:58 0 Thumb-ups
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Develop the idea + make more tasks

I agree with Kris S. Made another shot because of the Tasks.

I don't really think that one can make a decent documentary using this material. Maybe you don't even think so yourself.

A documentary should, in my opinion, start with thinking more about the concepts and dialectics of the subject matter which then should be visualized / collected in order to get the actual documentary film.

I'd suggest this:

A) You make a summary film based on the lectures. So not really a documentary but just squeezing this material into a more tight package.

OR

B) You make two or more Tasks here to think about the themes and how to dramatize it. What kind of other material than the lectures should be needed to really think about this.

I myself think that the dialectic between deep ecology v.s. the hopes of the future and hopes of the future v.s. the threat of climate change could make for a few pointers.

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Kris S. May 02, 2010 16:26 3 Thumb-ups
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Erm... be more specific? :)

It's great to see something new on Wreckamovie, and documentaries are definitely on the rise as a film genre ("Supersize Me" etc have been mainstream hits).

However, if you want other people's help you need to do two things:

-Be very specific about the help you need

-Show that you've done a lot of work on the project yourself

At the moment you're basically just saying "write the screenplay", which people are unlikely to repond to.

What you could do is provide a summary of what the screenplay should include, refer to other works with a similar style, tell us what kind of film this will be, who it will be made for, what the budget is etc...

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