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Daniel Saarimäki gave a shot "Story" for The Rise
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Here is the first version of the story. Your suggestions and comments are greatly welcomed.
722 days ago | 0 Comments | 1 Thumb-up 

Your story seems like a ordinary fantasy story. I hate them, but it's the best solution for this movie. Some things I like to say:

-Is there any other villages than dark village and village of light? You said that the black side has the most of the world, but if there are just two villages, do the black ones have anything to have? Lord of the Rings was good, because it had hughe and carefully planned world, wich made it more interesting

-There are only one healer in each side. The reason coul be, that they are traditional personal guards of the king.

-The ability to make protectors from water, fire and etc. is a good thing. It makes this movie different from the other similar films, so I suggest to put that scene earlier and put the hero to use that ability many times. Your version is brilliant though. This is just a suggestion.
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Daniel Saarimäki commented a shot
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The Rise > Story > Hard to read
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Could you attach a .rtf file also? That text file is little bit hard to read.
722 days ago | 0 Thumb-ups 
Wow. 3 pages!
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The Rise > Story > Hard to read
by: Daniel Saarimäki
Could you attach a .rtf file also? That text file is little bit hard to read.
722 days ago | 0 Thumb-ups 
Copypaste it into a wordprocessor.
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Daniel Saarimäki gave a shot "Hard to read" for The Rise
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The Rise > Story > Hard to read
Here is the first version of the story. Your suggestions and comments are greatly welcomed.
725 days ago | 2 Comments | 1 Thumb-up 

Could you attach a .rtf file also? That text file is little bit hard to read.
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New task: Story

Here is the first version of the story. Your suggestions and comments are greatly welcomed.

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Qasim created a new production "The Rise"

A man wakes up to find the world amidst a chaotic struggle between good and evil. Soon he finds out that his returned, to this fantastical world has been prophesied and that his destiny is to unite the LIGHT and the DARK.

The journey takes him through fantastical environments and creatures.

PS. read the story to get the real feel of the film.