I have started working on the second draft and have found a direction for the story. I will still need help in further revisions, but for now thanks for the help everyone.
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What we need is ideas for the appearance of the hero, the bodyguard.
Here are somethings I had in mind...
-He is alone
-carries a leather case, with the Replicator machine inside it?
-Has an automatic rifle
-Heavy boots for stomping things.
-Possibly armor. Nothing super-thick.
-Clueless in the wild, needs help from gadgets of some sorts.
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In a world infested with zombies, a hot-headed security guard is given an assignment to save mankind by delivering the Replicator-machine to a group of scientists who he thinks are hiding in an old military bunker, deep in the forest.
Do you feel the logline needs to be improved? Write your suggestions here.
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