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Okay, finally have a little more to add to the plot:

After Ayn disappears from the house, she opens the file again, again noticing Astraea's name on the list. She decides to pay her a visit in jail.

Meanwhile, Brand walks around town, and notices a man walk out of a club and down an alleyway. He decides to follow him, and goes down the alley as well. When he sees the man try to light up a cigarette, he decides to help him out a little by raising the temperature of the end of the cigarette (while the flame is not lit). The guy notices this, then sees Alden at the end of the alleyway; he immediately throws the cigarette towards a wall, and tries to back away from Alden. Alden forms a knife of ice in his hand, and backs the man against a wall, before stabbing him, and throwing the knife against the wall and leaving the alley.

Ayn sits at a table in a jail as Astraea walks in. She sits, and Ayn asks her about the trial, specifically if she ever saw who ran it. Astraea tells her she met him, and that it was Alden. Ayn, curious and slightly confused, asks her why a metallurgist was running a cancer trial; Astraea corrects her by explaining that Alden is not a metallurgist, but a geneticist, dropping a big piece of the puzzle in her lap. She leaves, and Astraea returns to her cell.

Ayn and Jamie meet up, Ayn explaining she got the information she needed, while Jamie had to knock the security guys unconscious before escaping, then redirect them after he got out of his armour. Ayn explains that Alden is a geneticist, not a metallurgist; Jamie corrects her by saying he's now a serial murderer, as he shows her a stop-press article saying a body had been found.

The pair turn up at the alleyway where the body is, and Ayn uses her journalistic privilege to get as much information as she can: that the man was murdered with a psi-shaped blade, and the weapon is missing, thus proving Jamie correct. He then gets an idea, and asks Ayn to help him.

That afternoon, Ayn announces on the news that the Human Tank had issued a challenge to the murderer: turn himself in, or face being tracked down by him. Everyone sees this threat made, including the Police Commissioner, who reopens his safe, pulling out the vials that were given to him (in Grey Areas). He then takes one, and calls some of his police officers together, explaining that one of them would have to make the ultimate sacrifice to become a better person. One officer, Constable Peel, steps forward, and offers himself for the experiment. He is injected with the vial's contents, and begins convulsing.

Jamie thanks Ayn for putting the challenge forward on his behalf, but Ayn is skeptical: she is not sure it would work, as he would most likely try to avoid detection as much as possible. Jamie assures her it will work, somehow, as he will eventually make a mistake.

True to his word, that night, while Jamie is out in town (carrying a backpack, which contains his armour), he spots a woman in an alley being attacked by a man in a hooded cloak with an icicle knife shaped like the psi-knife. At that point, Jamie realises that the man is Alden, and runs towards him. Alden notices him, and runs off, leaving the woman, and Jamie gives chase.

Eventually Jamie (who has now changed into his armour) and Alden make it out into an abandoned open area. Jamie tells Alden he can't escape now, at which point Alden produces his original knife, now with magnesium strips along the blades, which suddenly become hotter and light up. Jamie is amazed at what happened to the knife, and Alden tells him he will enjoy using it on him; they then commence fighting.

Alden tries to swing the odds in his favour by heating up the metal in Jamie's suit; it works to a degree, as he suffers underneath the heating, but refuses to take it off. Alden makes the mistake of approaching him, and he uses his claws to swipe across Alden's hand, essentially shifting his concentration from Jamie to his own wrist, freeing Jamie from his heated suit. He then pins Alden to the ground, and requests him to give himself in. Alden then drops his own little bombshells: that he knows Jamie Seward is the Human Tank, that he kidnapped China after she visited him, and that his knife had actually been created by a metallokinetic under his "employ".

The police turn up in the open area, and Alden makes the statement to Jamie and the police that, without him, the Human Tank cannot exist, because "he created him". This statement makes Jamie release Alden, and he runs free, leaving Jamie in a state of shock and disappointment. However, the police insist on him standing down, placing his hands behind his head and removing his helmet. Jamie reveals he's not the one he should be arrested, but the police do not listen and take it as a sign of resistence; in response, knowing he is a superhuman vigilante, they ask Constable Peel, whose musculature has now been bulked up, to take him in. Jamie realises quickly that he cannot affect Peel in the same way he can hurt normal humans, and as such tries to avoid his blows, all the while trying to convince him that they are on the same side. He does, however, find that he can still cut Peel's skin, and does so in order to affect his escape. Peel gets the other police to follow him.

When the police finally catch up with him, Jamie's out of his suit, and sitting in the alley out of breath. When the police ask him where the Human Tank went, he points down the alley, and they follow his direction.

Later that night, Ayn turns up at Jamie's house. He's seated on the couch, with a diagram of the human skeleton in one hand, and a pencil in another. She tells him that she knows Alden escaped him, and that he was lucky to escape the police again, especially the now-superhuman Peel. Jamie agrees half-heartedly. When Ayn asks what he's doing, he simply responds, "Making myself better."

Meanwhile, in the police house gym, Peel, with his wrist in a bandage, walks around before punching a bag, breaking it open. He mutters under his breath that he will bring the Human Tank in, some day.

And scene. As you'll all notice, I've wrapped up a few stray threads in this, and collated a few ideas here as well, including those by Ratna and Carl, while introducing another potential antagonist for Seward: the superstrong Constable Peel. Granted, I ended up doing a little retconning in turn, but I think it'll work well for the story.

What does everyone think of the full plot for this? Ideas and opinions please. Feel free to say what you wish.