Thanks! I'm going to improve that scene a lot.

I'm going to change your script bit. I don't delete anything. I add few scenes and some more talking. There is one scene you should notice when planning the number two. In that scene Sample, assistant and the soldier group meet a burning mutant. That mutant is the first Sample. He's now the overmind of all mutants and invincible. He's also really angry for the other Sample, because he survived. Sample and the others nearly get killed when escaping from the other Sample. That mutant Sample propably survives the blast in the ending so you can use that in the next version (remember that all the other mutants get killed and it can take a while to get a new army in the middle of a dessert), if I'm going to make any. I have SO many other ideas.

If I'm going to make the second movie, you still have to wait. It's going to get few years to make this one :)

Just saw the first scene. I think the movie's going to be great. I have a great idea for number two when your ready. Thank you for allowing me to participate. Best of luck in completing the project. You are a man of vision.

Kind regards Mehmet

It should be published... I checked it from the settings.

Edit: I found the reson! Fixed.

I think you have forgotten to publish it or something like that.